too clean

people say funny things. many quoteable lines have been uttered around me.

"Anything that clean has got to be evil." -Unger

My story was criticked (no idea how to spell that) in class last night. Not as bad as I thought it would be ... they wanted more of stuff, which is what I thought was going to happen since I barely wrote anything at all. I'll post it next (without changing anything so you can get the first draft). It is the start of a larger work... if I get around to writing it. I have to write another story for this class as well. It is due the day before Thanksgiving.